“Porcelain Cobra Tautologies” (draft) – concrete poem by Dark wall

Porcelain Cobra Tautologies (draft)

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  1. minxuslinxus
    Jan 05, 2013 @ 22:27:37

    There is a latent sadness through all the poem. Yet it is so absolutely beautiful. Gives me chills… The seeds you planted in porcelain. Sigh… but I love it.

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  2. suffolkrebecca
    Jan 07, 2013 @ 21:31:55

    Wow! Agree with above but also note harmony between imagery/ symbols/ sound/ meaning/ words. IMVHO

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  3. Dark wall
    Jan 07, 2013 @ 23:24:55

    Rancher said: “Dw, if done your best then thats what you did.”

    I drawd that snake like I seed it in my head.

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